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Thursday, 18 August 2016

Narrative Writing


"Help me!" Help me!" Came the call from behind the steel door. I was afraid so I moved back. Then I thought to myself should I help? I wasn’t too sure about the choice that I made. Luckily there was a steel bat beside me. Yes, a weapon would be more protection. I moved towards the door. I smashed my bat on the door. BANG! The door handle came off. Somebody was on the other side of the door, they pushed it really hard  from the inside. I was shocked to see it was my friend. He was so relieved to be free, he ran up to me and shook my hand. “Thank you for rescuing me, I’ve been locked in since yesterday”
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  1. Anonymous21 August 2016 at 16:27

    I like how you used your punctuation to write your story.

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  2. Siosiana P24 August 2016 at 00:51

    Wow son. This is lovely piece of writing, well done with trying your best to use punctuations in your writing. I can see you have improved a lot and am very pleased. Keep it up, ofa atu.

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  3. Siosiana P24 August 2016 at 00:51

    Wow son. This is lovely piece of writing, well done with trying your best to use punctuations in your writing. I can see you have improved a lot and am very pleased. Keep it up, ofa atu.

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