My Best Writing for Term 1

Family Reunion

Yes! During the first week of school holidays my family and I were getting our two bedrooms rear unit prepared for our relatives to come and stay.  They arrived on Thursday 25, 2015  then we had our practice, singing and dancing.  Everything went well and everyone was happy about everything until someone made a mistake then my uncle also yelled at me for not listening.  I got embarrassed but after a while I felt better again.  He apologised then we finished off the night with a midnight snack.-  Paragraph

Next, all of us fell asleep like dead pigs lying everywhere.  Brrrrrring! Brrrrrrrrrrrring! The alarm went off and everyone got up and rushed around like animals, because we were running out of time.  We quickly hopped into the van and zoomed to Mt Albert War Memorial Reserve  for the opening of our Reunion.  A great massive delicious feast was prepared for all the families that came, meanwhile everyone was eating and I jumped out of my seat and escaped from my seat because I felt nauseated.-  Paragraph

Last of all when it finished, we went home lazily and so exhausted.  When we got home we raced to see who was going to sleep on the bed, as the late ones would have to sleep on the mattresses.  WOW What a day it was for me and I was completely used up.-  Paragraph

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